篇一：theothersideofthewall读后感
高考英语写作指导-写故事读后感技巧
写作任务
阅读下面一则故事，写一篇
10词左右的读后感。
A
pound
is
a
pound
There
was
once
a
farmer
who,
each
week,
sold
a
pound
of
butter
to
a
baker.
After
several
weeks
of
buying
a
pound
of
butter
from
the
farmer,
the
baker
decided
to
weigh
the
butter
that
he
was
receiving
to
ensure
it
was
indeed
a
full
pound.
When
the
baker
weighed
it,
he
found
that
the
butter
was
under
a
pound,
which
made
him
angry.
He
felt
he
was
being
cheated
and
decided
to
take
the
farmer
to
court.
When
in
court,
the
judge
asked
the
farmer
how
he
was
weighing
the
butter.
The
farmer
said,
“I
am
poor.
I
do
not
own
an
exact
measuring
tool.
However,
I
do
have
a
scale
(天平).”
The
judge
then
asked
if
the
farmer
used
the
scale
to
measure
the
butter.
The
farmer
said,
“I
have
been
buying
a
one-pound
loaf
of
bread
from
the
baker
since
long
before
he
began
buying
butter
from
me.
Whenever
the
baker
brings
bread
for
me,
I
put
it
on
the
scale
and
then
measure
out
butter
of
the
exact
same
weight
to
give
him
in
return.
So,
if
the
baker
is
not
getting
a
pound
of
butter,
he
is
also
not
giving
me
a
pound
of
bread
as
he
promised.”
_______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
写作指导
一、审题定调
本写作任务要求写一篇读后感。读后感是读了一本书、一篇文章、一首诗、一段话或者
几句名言后，把具体感受和得到的启示用书面形式写成的文章。我们在写读后感时既要有
“读”的内容，又要有“感”的内容。“读”要求抓住重点，“感”要求写出体会。
二、谋篇布局
本写作可以分为三部分：
第一部分：点明所读故事的标题或主旨；
第二部分：概述故事大意；
第三部分：阐述该故事对你的启示。
范文展示
Recently
I
read
a
story
named
A
pound
is
a
pound,
which
impressed
me
deeply.
The
story
is
about
a
farmer
and
a
baker.
The
baker
bought
butter
from
the
farmer
each
week.
One
day
he
weighed
the
butter
and
found
it
was
under
a
pound.
As
a
result,
he
took
the
farmer
to
court.
It
turned
out
every
time
the
farmer
got
a
loaf
of
bread
weighing
less
than
a
pound,
he
used
his
scale
to
measure
the
same
amount
of
butter
for
the
baker.
The
story
has
taught
me
a
valuable
lesson:
You
get
what
you
give;
if
you
try
to
cheat
others,
you
will
be
cheated
in
return.
实战演练
阅读下面一则故事，写一篇
10词左右的读后感。
The
other
side
of
the
wall
A
young
woman
had
a
beautiful
garden.
She
loved
gardening
and
was
very
proud
of
her
garden.
One
day,
she
saw
a
very
beautiful
plant
and
wanted
that
for
her
garden.
She
bought
it
and
planted
it
at
the
base
of
the
stone
wall
in
her
backyard.
She
took
great
care
of
the
plant,
which
grew
quickly
and
had
beautiful
green
leaves
on
it.
Months
passed,
but
not
a
single
flower
bloomed
(盛开)
on
the
plant.
Annoyed,
she
almost
wanted
to
cut
it
down.
At
such
a
time,
her
neighbor
called
and
said,
“Thank
you
so
much
for
the
beautiful
flowers.
You
have
no
idea
how
much
I
enjoy
looking
at
the
blooms
of
the
vine
(藤)
you
have
planted.”
Hearing
this,
the
young
woman
rushed
to
the
neighbor’s
side
of
the
wall
and
saw
the
most
beautiful
flowers
in
bloom.
All
the
care
she
took
had
paid
off.
The
vine
did
not
flower
on
her
side
of
the
wall
but
did
generously
on
the
other
side.
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
作文素材
face
a
moral
dilemma
throughout
her
life
take
the
entrance
examination
Personal
experience
be
elected
to
...
carry
her
through
a
life
of
hard
choices
pass
away
follow
the
traditional
path
of
marriage
be
responsible
for
the
patients
Morals
and
virtues
leave
her
savings
to
...
keep
their
neighbours
from
harm
charge
very
low
fees
trip
over
with
all
her
might
tend
to
do
sth.
Others
first
aid
in
need
of
help
play
a
key
role
give
us
a
look
into
...
ear
once
upon
a
time
参考答案
如何写故事读后感
One
possible
version:
I
have
read
many
stories,
but
the
most
unforgettable
one
is
The
other
side
of
the
wall,
which
is
about
how
efforts
pay
off.
A
woman
who
loved
gardening
planted
a
beautiful
plant
at
the
base
of
the
stone
wall
in
her
hold
many
important
positions
in
tears
in
despair
in
memory
of
resident
physician
tuition
fees
a
great
deal
of
effort
whisper
something
into
his
backyard.
She
took
great
care
of
the
plant,
and
it
grew
quickly.
What
annoyed
her
was
that
there
was
not
a
single
flower.
It
was
not
until
her
neighbor
thanked
her
for
the
beautiful
flowers
that
she
knew
her
care
had
paid
off.
Fromthestory,Ihavelearnedthatnoeffortwillbewasted.Thatyoucan’tseethegoodresultsofyoureffortsdoesnotmeanthattheyborenofruit.
篇二：theothersideofthewall读后感
高考英语写作指导-写故事读后感技巧
写作任务
阅读下面一则故事，写一篇
10词左右的读后感。
A
pound
is
a
pound
There
was
once
a
farmer
who,
each
week,
sold
a
pound
of
butter
to
a
baker.
After
several
weeks
of
buying
a
pound
of
butter
from
the
farmer,
the
baker
decided
to
weigh
the
butter
that
he
was
receiving
to
ensure
it
was
indeed
a
full
pound.
When
the
baker
weighed
it,
he
found
that
the
butter
was
under
a
pound,
which
made
him
angry.
He
felt
he
was
being
cheated
and
decided
to
take
the
farmer
to
court.
When
in
court,
the
judge
asked
the
farmer
how
he
was
weighing
the
butter.
The
farmer
said,
“I
am
poor.
I
do
not
own
an
exact
measuring
tool.
However,
I
do
have
a
scale
(天平).”
The
judge
then
asked
if
the
farmer
used
the
scale
to
measure
the
butter.
The
farmer
said,
“I
have
been
buying
a
one-pound
loaf
of
bread
from
the
baker
since
long
before
he
began
buying
butter
from
me.
Whenever
the
baker
brings
bread
for
me,
I
put
it
on
the
scale
and
then
measure
out
butter
of
the
exact
same
weight
to
give
him
in
return.
So,
if
the
baker
is
not
getting
a
pound
of
butter,
he
is
also
not
giving
me
a
pound
of
bread
as
he
promised.”
_______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
写作指导
一、审题定调
本写作任务要求写一篇读后感。读后感是读了一本书、一篇文章、一首诗、一段话或者
几句名言后，把具体感受和得到的启示用书面形式写成的文章。我们在写读后感时既要有
“读”的内容，又要有“感”的内容。“读”要求抓住重点，“感”要求写出体会。
二、谋篇布局
本写作可以分为三部分：
第一部分：点明所读故事的标题或主旨；
第二部分：概述故事大意；
第三部分：阐述该故事对你的启示。
范文展示
Recently
I
read
a
story
named
A
pound
is
a
pound,
which
impressed
me
deeply.
The
story
is
about
a
farmer
and
a
baker.
The
baker
bought
butter
from
the
farmer
each
week.
One
day
he
weighed
the
butter
and
found
it
was
under
a
pound.
As
a
result,
he
took
the
farmer
to
court.
It
turned
out
every
time
the
farmer
got
a
loaf
of
bread
weighing
less
than
a
pound,
he
used
his
scale
to
measure
the
same
amount
of
butter
for
the
baker.
The
story
has
taught
me
a
valuable
lesson:
You
get
what
you
give;
if
you
try
to
cheat
others,
you
will
be
cheated
in
return.
实战演练
阅读下面一则故事，写一篇
10词左右的读后感。
The
other
side
of
the
wall
A
young
woman
had
a
beautiful
garden.
She
loved
gardening
and
was
very
proud
of
her
garden.
One
day,
she
saw
a
very
beautiful
plant
and
wanted
that
for
her
garden.
She
bought
it
and
planted
it
at
the
base
of
the
stone
wall
in
her
backyard.
She
took
great
care
of
the
plant,
which
grew
quickly
and
had
beautiful
green
leaves
on
it.
Months
passed,
but
not
a
single
flower
bloomed
(盛开)
on
the
plant.
Annoyed,
she
almost
wanted
to
cut
it
down.
At
such
a
time,
her
neighbor
called
and
said,
“Thank
you
so
much
for
the
beautiful
flowers.
You
have
no
idea
how
much
I
enjoy
looking
at
the
blooms
of
the
vine
(藤)
you
have
planted.”
Hearing
this,
the
young
woman
rushed
to
the
neighbor’s
side
of
the
wall
and
saw
the
most
beautiful
flowers
in
bloom.
All
the
care
she
took
had
paid
off.
The
vine
did
not
flower
on
her
side
of
the
wall
but
did
generously
on
the
other
side.
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
作文素材
face
a
moral
dilemma
throughout
her
life
take
the
entrance
examination
Personal
experience
be
elected
to
...
carry
her
through
a
life
of
hard
choices
pass
away
follow
the
traditional
path
of
marriage
be
responsible
for
the
patients
Morals
and
virtues
leave
her
savings
to
...
keep
their
neighbours
from
harm
charge
very
low
fees
trip
over
with
all
her
might
tend
to
do
sth.
Others
first
aid
in
need
of
help
play
a
key
role
give
us
a
look
into
...
ear
once
upon
a
time
参考答案
如何写故事读后感
One
possible
version:
I
have
read
many
stories,
but
the
most
unforgettable
one
is
The
other
side
of
the
wall,
which
is
about
how
efforts
pay
off.
A
woman
who
loved
gardening
planted
a
beautiful
plant
at
the
base
of
the
stone
wall
in
her
hold
many
important
positions
in
tears
in
despair
in
memory
of
resident
physician
tuition
fees
a
great
deal
of
effort
whisper
something
into
his
backyard.
She
took
great
care
of
the
plant,
and
it
grew
quickly.
What
annoyed
her
was
that
there
was
not
a
single
flower.
It
was
not
until
her
neighbor
thanked
her
for
the
beautiful
flowers
that
she
knew
her
care
had
paid
off.
Fromthestory,Ihavelearnedthatnoeffortwillbewasted.Thatyoucan’tseethegoodresultsofyoureffortsdoesnotmeanthattheyborenofruit.